Research and Planning draft feedback

Location Recce

Three of my images will be shot in this studio, this is show i am able to shoot the images of them on a white background so its a clean image and i can use one of the images on the front cover to cut the background out. The photos show that the environment that i have chosen to use to shoot is safe and enough space, i will also use this location because it is available to me.

Inspiration Images

Costume, Props and Make-up

The image above is the look i am going for for my contents page.

My model for the double page spread will be topless no no costume is needed and no props needed as i want to keep it minimalistic which i think it very effective. 

Model Release Forms

Hazzard and Risk Assessment

Organising Models

Front Cover&DPS Model
Sarah Hall

Contents Page Spread Model
Lewis Henry

Planning my Article

Your article:

What is your article about? (Specific band/Artist, Experience, Gig, Album release)

My article is about Sarah Hall a catwalk model dating an r&b raper 

What sort of article is it? (Interview, review, Story etc.) 

an interview of how she likes the r&b world

Style:

What Narrative voice will it be written in?

varied
What sort of words are used by people into the kind of music featured in the article and magazine? 

'exclusive' 'bares all' 'revealed'  
popular artists mentioned  (jay z, beyond ect)

What type of introductory paragraph will you use?The first paragraph needs to encourage readers to read on. How will you make the content sound important, dramatic, exclusive, new, different, something that must be read?
something that catches the readers attention and makes them want to read on, i haven't yet decided what exactly I am going to have but i have ideas which i have got help from my research of other magazines 

Images and Composition

 This image of Rihanna shows her posing in a a cheeky way with a smile on her face where we can see half her face because she is turning her head from a back view of her back where we see her tattoo which states she is confident in her body to show off her tattoo. She is shown in a plain costume where we can see just a bit of her top. The colours are plain, her nude skin colour and the black hair and black tattoo and background. Her make up is subtle. Her hair is shaven at the side we see of her head which shows she is rebellious and not afraid to be different.

Kelly is dressed with an urban edge with a leather motor bike jacket and big gold hoop ear rings showing her bad girl side, she had big thick curly hair covering a lot of her face but we see her eyes in the top third looking straight at the camera, her body language isn't as confident as Rihannas in the image above. Her body isn't facing the camera but her head slightly tilted towards us. We don't see a lot of her skin but from her eyes we can see she is confident and is giving a sturdy glare to the camera.